14 thoughts on “Rise”

  1. I don’t know if this was your intention, but the line “Since we are still in today’s light, let’s strive to finish the fight” reminds me of a combination of what Jesus and Paul said. It’s hopeful. Sometimes I think we’re in the darkness, but I have to remember that we still have light, and that I need to stay on the narrow path and finish strong.

    Like, obviously the poem is about accomplishing a goal. But, that line really resonates with me;—because my goal in life is to be filled with Light and Christ, and to finish life with God’s blessing. I know I fall down sometimes—a lot of time—but that’s why there’s always forgiveness. Not to say what we did in the past was okay, but so we don’t despair and have no reason to change in the future.

    Good poem!

    1. Thank you for sharing your thoughtsπŸ™ I am truly glad to hear you received some positivity from my poem, as it is always my intention to remind everyone out there that they are never alone and to keep going no matter how dark it gets.

      All the best🌠

      1. Anytime. Thanks for being one of my readers. You don’t have to publish this comment, I just wanted to thank you. You’ve been consistent on reading my posts. πŸ™‚ So thank you!

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