Light So Bright

Light so bright, the type clouds can’t hide the fight.
No darkness can use fright, or even excite.
This is the overwrite, the cleaning of the night to start a new day right.

20 responses to “Light So Bright”

  1. Quite some might.

  2. Excellent writing and feeling, I’m left with this acertive phrase…
    “This is the overwriting, the cleaning of the night to start a new day well”.
    Nice day. A pleasure to read you.

    1. Thank you Lincol!! Hope your day started and continues right✨

      1. My pleasure. I’m having a good day so far and hope it stays that way for the whole course.

    1. Thank you🙏🤗

  3. I like your time using internal and external rhyme.

    1. Thank you for sharing your feedback🙏

  4. Dear reflectsapathy,

    Well done! I am concentrating the rhymes even more so as to create a new tongue twister as follows:

    This is the might to fight for the light so bright to overwrite fright and excite the night to start a new day right!

    Yours sincerely,

    1. I appreciate the poem rewrite, it has a snap pace that is a delight🤗

      Thank you for sharing your thoughts on my poem today and I hope you have a great day✨

      1. Dear reflectsapathy,

        You are very welcome. Keep up the good work and thank you for wishing me a great day.

        If My Name Were Moon Tonight…, would my light be so bright as to overwrite fright and excite the night to start a new day right? Please come and find out at

        Wishing you a productive November and a wonderful week doing or enjoying whatever that satisfies you the most, whether intellectually, artistically, physically, spiritually or poetically!

        Yours sincerely,

      2. Thank you SE💫 Great blog post🔥 I wish you all the best as well!!

      3. Dear reflectsapathy,

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      4. Great Blog and thanks letting me know about your blog content🤗 I look forward to your next post✨

  5. wonderful 🤗

    1. Thank you Barbara🙏😊

      1. you are very welcome 🙂

  6. I really like this poem – I love the theme and your thoughts on it are excellently expressed 😊

    1. Thanks🙏 I truly appreciate you saying that🤗

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